Essay type: Opinion (agree / disagree — to what extent)Band 4.5-6.0Stance: AgreeTarget ≈ 260 wordsModel essay: Band 6.0
Student's Edition
Ngô Đức Thảo
MTESOL · Academic Director
Task 2 Topic
The government should spend money on putting more works of art (like paintings and statues) in towns and cities to make them more attractive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
1Task analysis
Item
Detail
Essay type
Opinion (agree / disagree — to what extent)
Main topic
Whether governments should pay for more paintings, statues and other artworks in public places to make towns more attractive
Keywords
government · spend money · works of art · towns and cities · more attractive
Task focus
Judge whether public money should be used for art in public spaces to make places more attractive
Required position
Say clearly how far you agree or disagree and keep the same position in every paragraph
Plain-English meaning
Should the government use taxpayers' money to put more paintings and statues in streets and parks so cities look nicer?
Hidden trap
The purpose in the statement is to make them more attractive — discuss this purpose, and remember that the money could be used elsewhere
Chosen stance
Agree. Public art makes cities more pleasant for residents and attracts visitors
Main-idea plan
BP1 → art makes streets and parks more pleasant for residents · BP2 → art attracts tourists and makes people proud of their city
2Idea generation
Body 1 — Nicer places to live
Art makes streets and parks more pleasant ✓ strongest
Art makes people feel relaxed
Art gives children free lessons about culture dự phòng
Body 2 — More visitors and local pride
Statues and murals attract tourists ✓ strongest
People feel proud of their city
Local artists get jobs dự phòng
✓ strongest = ý dùng trong bài mẫu · dự phòng = ý thay thế, không có trong bài mẫu.
3Skeleton
Introduction
General statement: Cities = grey buildings, busy roads
Paraphrased task: Rewrite: government pays for public art
Thesis: I agree — two reasons
Body 1: Art → nicer streets and parks, happier residents
Body 2: Art → tourists come, local pride
Conclusion: Restate the opinion → summarise both reasons → final thought
4Plan & write your paragraphs
How to use: Read the main idea, tap the cue words to add them to the box, then write
your own sentence. Your essay is built automatically at the bottom and saved in this browser.
Introduction(40–55 words)
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Goal: Topic → rewrite the statement → give your opinion.
General statement
Main idea: Cities = grey buildings, busy roads
Starter: Many towns and cities … ·
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Paraphrased task
Main idea: Rewrite: government pays for public art
Starter: Some people think that … ·
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Thesis
Main idea: I agree — two reasons
Starter: I agree with this … ·
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Body Paragraph 1 — Nicer places to live(80–95 words)
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Goal: Reason 1: explain it and give an example.
Topic sentence
Main idea: Art → pleasant places to live
Starter: Firstly, public art can … ·
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Explanation 1
Main idea: People feel relaxed and happy
Starter: When people walk past … ·
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Example
Main idea: Painted wall at a bus stop
Starter: For example, a boring … ·
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Link
Main idea: Better daily life
Starter: Therefore, spending money on … ·
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Body Paragraph 2 — More visitors and local pride(80–95 words)
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Goal: Reason 2: explain it and give an example.
Topic sentence
Main idea: Art → tourists + pride
Starter: Secondly, works of art … ·
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Explanation 1
Main idea: Visitors come, take photos, share online
Starter: Famous statues and interesting … ·
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Example
Main idea: Tourists visit a famous statue
Starter: For instance, many tourists … ·
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Link
Main idea: Money comes back via tourism
Starter: As a result, the … ·
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Conclusion(30–45 words)
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Goal: Repeat your opinion, sum up both reasons, final thought. No new ideas!
Restated thesis
Main idea: I agree
Starter: In conclusion, I agree … ·
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Summary
Main idea: Pleasant places + tourists, pride
Starter: Art makes public places … ·
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Final thought
Main idea: Choose art people like
Starter: However, the government should … ·
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5Language bank (Band 4.5-6.0)
Mỗi đoạn có bảng collocation riêng. ✓ = có trong bài mẫu · + = cụm mở rộng để học viên tự dùng. 5.0 = nền tảng · 6.0 = nâng band.
Introduction
Collocation
Form
Vietnamese
Band
Bài mẫu
grey buildings
adj + noun
những toà nhà xám xịt
5.0
✓
busy roads
adj + noun
đường phố đông đúc
5.0
✓
public places
adj + noun
nơi công cộng
5.0
✓
more beautiful
adv + adj
đẹp hơn
5.0
✓
Body Paragraph 1 — Nicer places to live
Collocation
Form
Vietnamese
Band
Bài mẫu
public art
adj + noun
nghệ thuật công cộng
6.0
✓
pleasant places to live
noun phrase
nơi dễ chịu để sống
6.0
✓
feel more relaxed
verb phrase
cảm thấy thư thái hơn
5.0
✓
a long and stressful day
noun phrase
một ngày dài và căng thẳng
6.0
✓
a colourful picture
adj + noun
bức tranh nhiều màu sắc
5.0
✓
improve the daily lives
verb + noun
cải thiện cuộc sống hằng ngày
6.0
✓
Body Paragraph 2 — More visitors and local pride
Collocation
Form
Vietnamese
Band
Bài mẫu
attract tourists
verb + noun
thu hút khách du lịch
5.0
✓
proud of their city
adj + noun
tự hào về thành phố của mình
5.0
✓
take photos
verb + noun
chụp ảnh
5.0
✓
share them online
verb phrase
chia sẻ lên mạng
5.0
✓
spend money in local shops
verb phrase
tiêu tiền ở các cửa hàng địa phương
6.0
✓
through tourism
prep phrase
nhờ du lịch
6.0
✓
Conclusion
Collocation
Form
Vietnamese
Band
Bài mẫu
In conclusion
linker
tóm lại
5.0
✓
works of art
noun phrase
tác phẩm nghệ thuật
5.0
✓
local people
adj + noun
người dân địa phương
5.0
✓
bring tourists
verb + noun
mang lại khách du lịch
6.0
+
Useful structures
Subject + modal verb + base verb + object (should / can / will)
If + present simple, + will + verb (first conditional)
Noun + who / which + verb … (simple relative clause)
Because / Although + clause, + main clause
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