Should Schools Force Students to Learn Languages? — 20.03.2026
Essay type: Opinion (agree / disagree — to what extent)Band 4.5-6.0Stance: DisagreeTarget ≈ 260 wordsModel essay: Band 6.0
Student's Edition
Ngô Đức Thảo
MTESOL · Academic Director
Task 2 Topic
Some people believe that not all students have a natural ability for learning other languages, so schools should not force them to learn new languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
1Task analysis
Item
Detail
Essay type
Opinion (agree / disagree — to what extent)
Main topic
Whether foreign languages should be optional at school because some students lack natural talent
Keywords
natural ability · learning other languages · schools · should not force · new languages
Task focus
Decide whether language learning should be compulsory at school even for students without natural ability
Required position
Say clearly how far you agree or disagree and keep the same position in every paragraph
Plain-English meaning
Some students are not good at languages. Should schools stop making them study foreign languages?
Hidden trap
The statement contains a reason (not all students have a natural ability) and a conclusion (schools should not force them). You can accept the reason but reject the conclusion
Chosen stance
Disagree. A foreign language is useful for every student's future, and most students can learn the basics with effort and good teaching
Main-idea plan
BP1 → languages help students get jobs, travel and use the internet · BP2 → hard work and good teachers help students without talent learn the basics
2Idea generation
Body 1 — Languages are useful for everyone
Languages help students find better jobs ✓ strongest
Students can travel and use the internet
Students learn about other cultures dự phòng
Body 2 — Effort matters more than talent
Hard work and good teaching matter more than talent ✓ strongest
Schools can give different levels
Learning a language trains the brain dự phòng
✓ strongest = ý dùng trong bài mẫu · dự phòng = ý thay thế, không có trong bài mẫu.
3Skeleton
Introduction
General statement: Schools teach foreign languages
Paraphrased task: Rewrite: weak students should not have to study languages
Thesis: I disagree — two reasons
Body 1: Languages → jobs, travel, internet for everyone
Body 2: Effort + good teaching → basic level for all
Conclusion: Restate the opinion → summarise both reasons → final thought
4Plan & write your paragraphs
How to use: Read the main idea, tap the cue words to add them to the box, then write
your own sentence. Your essay is built automatically at the bottom and saved in this browser.
Introduction(40–55 words)
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Goal: Topic → rewrite the statement → give your opinion.
General statement
Main idea: Schools teach foreign languages
Starter: Today, most schools around … ·
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Paraphrased task
Main idea: Rewrite: weak students should not have to study languages
Starter: Some people think that … ·
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Thesis
Main idea: I disagree — two reasons
Starter: I disagree with this … ·
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Body Paragraph 1 — Languages are useful for everyone(80–95 words)
0 words
Goal: Reason 1: explain it and give an example.
Topic sentence
Main idea: Useful for every student
Starter: Firstly, a foreign language … ·
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Explanation 1
Main idea: Jobs, travel, internet
Starter: In the modern world … ·
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Example
Main idea: Engineer reads English
Starter: For example, a young … ·
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Link
Main idea: All students should learn one
Starter: Therefore, schools should help … ·
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Body Paragraph 2 — Effort matters more than talent(80–95 words)
0 words
Goal: Reason 2: explain it and give an example.
Topic sentence
Main idea: Hard work + good teachers
Starter: Secondly, most students can … ·
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Explanation 1
Main idea: Practice matters more than talent
Starter: Natural talent is helpful … ·
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Example
Main idea: Weak students improve
Starter: For instance, many students … ·
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Link
Main idea: Support, not stop
Starter: As a result, schools … ·
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Conclusion(30–45 words)
0 words
Goal: Repeat your opinion, sum up both reasons, final thought. No new ideas!
Restated thesis
Main idea: I disagree
Starter: In conclusion, I disagree … ·
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Summary
Main idea: Useful + effort works
Starter: Languages are useful for … ·
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Final thought
Main idea: Extra help for weak students
Starter: Schools should therefore offer … ·
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5Language bank (Band 4.5-6.0)
Mỗi đoạn có bảng collocation riêng. ✓ = có trong bài mẫu · + = cụm mở rộng để học viên tự dùng. 5.0 = nền tảng · 6.0 = nâng band.
Introduction
Collocation
Form
Vietnamese
Band
Bài mẫu
foreign language
adj + noun
ngoại ngữ
5.0
✓
from an early age
prep phrase
từ khi còn nhỏ
6.0
✓
good at languages
adv + adj
giỏi ngoại ngữ
5.0
✓
two main reasons
noun phrase
hai lý do chính
5.0
✓
Body Paragraph 1 — Languages are useful for everyone
Collocation
Form
Vietnamese
Band
Bài mẫu
useful for every student
adv + adj
hữu ích cho mọi học sinh
5.0
✓
the modern world
adj + noun
thế giới hiện đại
5.0
✓
good jobs
adj + noun
công việc tốt
5.0
✓
use the internet
verb + noun
sử dụng internet
5.0
✓
an international company
adj + noun
công ty quốc tế
6.0
✓
a higher salary
adj + noun
mức lương cao hơn
6.0
✓
Body Paragraph 2 — Effort matters more than talent
Collocation
Form
Vietnamese
Band
Bài mẫu
work hard
verb + adv
học chăm chỉ
5.0
✓
natural talent
adj + noun
năng khiếu bẩm sinh
6.0
✓
regular practice
adj + noun
luyện tập đều đặn
5.0
✓
basic grammar and vocabulary
noun phrase
ngữ pháp và từ vựng cơ bản
6.0
✓
friendly and patient teachers
noun phrase
giáo viên thân thiện và kiên nhẫn
5.0
✓
weak students
adj + noun
học sinh yếu
5.0
✓
Conclusion
Collocation
Form
Vietnamese
Band
Bài mẫu
In conclusion
linker
tóm lại
5.0
✓
learn foreign languages
verb + noun
học ngoại ngữ
5.0
✓
the basics
noun phrase
kiến thức cơ bản
5.0
✓
offer extra help
verb + noun
hỗ trợ thêm
6.0
✓
Useful structures
Subject + modal verb + base verb + object (should / can / will)
If + present simple, + will + verb (first conditional)
Noun + who / which + verb … (simple relative clause)
Because / Although + clause, + main clause
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