Raising Fuel Costs to Protect the Environment — 02.01.2026

Task 2 Topic

Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

1Task analysis

Item	Detail
Essay type	Opinion (agree / disagree — to what extent)
Main topic	Whether making petrol and diesel more expensive is one of the best ways to reduce environmental problems
Keywords	environmental problems · increase the cost · fuels · cars and other vehicles · one of the best ways
Task focus	Judge a price-based solution (higher fuel costs) to environmental problems caused by vehicles
Required position	Say clearly how far you agree or disagree and keep the same position in every paragraph
Plain-English meaning	If petrol becomes more expensive, people may drive less and pollute less. Is this one of the best solutions?
Hidden trap	The statement says one of the best ways, not the only way — you can agree and still mention it works best with other measures
Chosen stance	Mostly agree. Higher fuel costs reduce unnecessary driving and raise money for green transport, but they must be combined with good alternatives
Main-idea plan	BP1 → higher prices discourage unnecessary journeys and cut emissions · BP2 → fuel tax revenue funds public transport and electric vehicles

2Idea generation

Body 1 — Less driving, fewer emissions

Higher prices discourage unnecessary car journeys ✓ strongest
Drivers switch to shared or public transport
Firms make more fuel-efficient engines dự phòng

Body 2 — Funding cleaner alternatives

Tax revenue can fund cleaner public transport ✓ strongest
Subsidies for electric vehicles
Less congestion saves time dự phòng

✓ strongest = ý dùng trong bài mẫu · dự phòng = ý thay thế, không có trong bài mẫu.

3Skeleton

Introduction

General statement: Traffic damages the environment
Paraphrased task: Rewrite: higher petrol/diesel price = good solution
Thesis: Mostly agree + needs alternatives

Body 1: Price rises discourage short, unnecessary trips → fewer emissions

Body 2: Revenue → public transport and electric vehicle subsidies

Conclusion: Restate the opinion → summarise both reasons → final thought

4Plan & write your paragraphs

How to use: Read the main idea, tap the cue words to add them to the box, then write your own sentence. Your essay is built automatically at the bottom and saved in this browser.

Introduction(45–60 words)

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Goal: Topic → rewrite the statement → give your opinion.

General statement

Main idea: Traffic damages the environment

Starter: Environmental damage caused by … ·

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Paraphrased task

Main idea: Rewrite: higher petrol/diesel price = good solution

Starter: It is argued that … ·

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Thesis

Main idea: Mostly agree + needs alternatives

Starter: I mostly agree with … ·

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Body Paragraph 1 — Less driving, fewer emissions(90–110 words)

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Goal: Reason 1: explain it and give an example.

Topic sentence

Main idea: Higher costs → less unnecessary driving

Starter: The main reason I … ·

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Explanation 1

Main idea: Drivers think twice about short trips

Starter: When motorists have to … ·

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Example

Main idea: Workers cycle or share cars

Starter: For example, many office … ·

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Explanation 2

Main idea: Fewer cars in rush hour

Starter: This would reduce the … ·

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Link

Main idea: Habits change → environment benefits

Starter: Therefore, a price increase … ·

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Body Paragraph 2 — Funding cleaner alternatives(90–110 words)

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Goal: Reason 2: explain it and give an example.

Topic sentence

Main idea: Revenue → clean transport

Starter: In addition, the extra … ·

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Explanation 1

Main idea: Buses, metro, EV subsidies

Starter: Governments could use this … ·

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Example

Main idea: Replace diesel buses

Starter: For instance, a city … ·

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Explanation 2

Main idea: People still travel easily

Starter: This means that people … ·

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Link

Main idea: Punish polluters + long-term benefits

Starter: As a result, the … ·

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Conclusion(35–50 words)

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Goal: Repeat your opinion, sum up both reasons, final thought. No new ideas!

Restated thesis

Main idea: I largely agree

Starter: In conclusion, I largely … ·

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Summary

Main idea: Less driving + money for clean transport

Starter: It reduces unnecessary driving … ·

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Final thought

Main idea: Alternatives first

Starter: However, governments must make … ·

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📝 My essay

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5Language bank (Band 5.5-6.5)

Mỗi đoạn có bảng collocation riêng. ✓ = có trong bài mẫu · + = cụm mở rộng để học viên tự dùng. 5.5 = nền tảng · 6.5 = nâng band.

Introduction

Collocation	Form	Vietnamese	Band	Bài mẫu
environmental damage	adj + noun	thiệt hại môi trường	6.5	✓
road traffic	noun + noun	giao thông đường bộ	5.5	✓
the most pressing issues	noun phrase	những vấn đề cấp bách nhất	6.5	✓
petrol and diesel	noun phrase	xăng và dầu diesel	5.5	✓
the most effective solutions	noun phrase	những giải pháp hiệu quả nhất	6.5	✓
good alternatives	adj + noun	các lựa chọn thay thế tốt	5.5	✓

Body Paragraph 1 — Less driving, fewer emissions

Collocation	Form	Vietnamese	Band	Bài mẫu
higher fuel costs	adj + noun	chi phí nhiên liệu cao hơn	5.5	✓
discourage unnecessary driving	verb + noun	hạn chế việc lái xe không cần thiết	6.5	✓
think twice	fixed phrase	cân nhắc kỹ	6.5	✓
short journeys	adj + noun	các chuyến đi ngắn	5.5	✓
sharing a car	verb + noun	đi chung xe	5.5	✓
rush hour	noun + noun	giờ cao điểm	5.5	✓
lower carbon emissions	verb + noun	giảm khí thải carbon	6.5	✓
change travel habits	verb + noun	thay đổi thói quen đi lại	6.5	+
fuel-efficient engines	adj + noun	động cơ tiết kiệm nhiên liệu	6.5	+

Body Paragraph 2 — Funding cleaner alternatives

Collocation	Form	Vietnamese	Band	Bài mẫu
extra revenue	adj + noun	nguồn thu thêm	6.5	✓
fuel taxes	noun + noun	thuế nhiên liệu	5.5	✓
cleaner forms of transport	noun phrase	các loại hình giao thông sạch hơn	6.5	✓
expand bus networks	verb + noun	mở rộng mạng lưới xe buýt	6.5	✓
offer subsidies	verb + noun	trợ giá	6.5	✓
electric vehicles	adj + noun	xe điện	5.5	✓
convenient and affordable	adv + adj	tiện lợi và giá phải chăng	5.5	✓
long-term environmental benefits	noun phrase	lợi ích môi trường lâu dài	6.5	✓
public transport	adj + noun	giao thông công cộng	5.5	✓

Conclusion

Collocation	Form	Vietnamese	Band	Bài mẫu
In conclusion	linker	tóm lại	5.5	✓
increasing fuel prices	verb + noun	tăng giá nhiên liệu	5.5	✓
tackle environmental problems	verb + noun	giải quyết các vấn đề môi trường	6.5	✓
unnecessary driving	adj + noun	việc lái xe không cần thiết	5.5	✓
affordable alternatives	adj + noun	các lựa chọn thay thế giá phải chăng	6.5	✓
prices rise	noun + noun	giá tăng	5.5	✓

Useful structures

Although + clause, + main clause (concession)
Noun, which + verb …, + main verb (non-defining relative clause)
If + present, + will / can + verb (conditional for results)
This means that + clause (explaining a consequence)
… be + past participle (passive voice for processes and policies)

6Self-check before you submit

Task Response: Clear position (Mostly agree) in the thesis, kept in both body paragraphs and restated in the conclusion; every reason is explained and supported by a realistic exampleCoherence & Cohesion: One reason per body paragraph, both supporting the same position; linkers In conclusion, In addition, For example, For instance, As a result, Therefore, However, This means that, Not onlyLexical Resource: Topic collocations from the Language bank; paraphrase the key words of the question (environmental problems, increase the cost, fuels)Grammar: Mix simple and complex sentences (although, which, if, passive); check articles and verb formsFit for band: Realistic examples, no invented statistics, about 270–300 words in total

7🔒 Model Essay (Band 6.5)

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