Free 24/7 Public Transport and Traffic Congestion — 29.01.2026
Essay type: Opinion (agree / disagree — to what extent)Band 5.5-6.5Stance: Mostly agreeTarget ≈ 280 wordsModel essay: Band 6.5
Student's Edition
Ngô Đức Thảo
MTESOL · Academic Director
Task 2 Topic
The government should provide free public transport 24/7 to solve traffic congestion. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
1Task analysis
Item
Detail
Essay type
Opinion (agree / disagree — to what extent)
Main topic
Whether free, round-the-clock public transport is a good way to reduce traffic jams
Keywords
government · free public transport · 24/7 · traffic congestion
Task focus
Evaluate free and 24/7 public transport as a solution to traffic congestion
Required position
Say clearly how far you agree or disagree and keep the same position in every paragraph
Plain-English meaning
If buses and trains were free and ran all day and night, would traffic jams disappear? Should the government do it?
Hidden trap
There are two conditions — free and 24/7. Discuss whether both are needed; the aim is to solve traffic congestion, so link every reason back to traffic
Chosen stance
Mostly agree. Free, round-the-clock transit removes the cost barrier and spreads demand across the day, although it must be reliable to attract drivers
Main-idea plan
BP1 → removing fares shifts drivers to buses and trains · BP2 → 24-hour service supports shift workers and eases peak-hour pressure
2Idea generation
Body 1 — Shifting drivers onto public transport
Removing fares shifts drivers to buses and trains ✓ strongest
Fewer vehicles mean shorter journeys for everyone
Lower emissions dự phòng
Body 2 — Round-the-clock service and traffic flow
24-hour service supports shift workers ✓ strongest
Demand is spread beyond rush hour
Safer travel at night dự phòng
✓ strongest = ý dùng trong bài mẫu · dự phòng = ý thay thế, không có trong bài mẫu.
Body 1: No fares → drivers switch → fewer vehicles, shorter journeys
Body 2: 24/7 → shift workers covered, peak-hour pressure eased
Conclusion: Restate the opinion → summarise both reasons → final thought
4Plan & write your paragraphs
How to use: Read the main idea, tap the cue words to add them to the box, then write
your own sentence. Your essay is built automatically at the bottom and saved in this browser.
Introduction(45–60 words)
0 words
Goal: Topic → rewrite the statement → give your opinion.
General statement
Main idea: Congestion = daily frustration
Starter: Traffic congestion has become … ·
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Paraphrased task
Main idea: Rewrite: fare-free, around-the-clock transit
Starter: It is suggested that … ·
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Thesis
Main idea: Mostly agree, if reliable
Starter: I mostly agree with … ·
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Body Paragraph 1 — Shifting drivers onto public transport(90–110 words)
0 words
Goal: Reason 1: explain it and give an example.
Topic sentence
Main idea: No fares → drivers switch
Starter: The main reason I … ·
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Explanation 1
Main idea: Ticket cost → cars
Starter: For many people, the … ·
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Example
Main idea: Family of four
Starter: For example, a family … ·
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Explanation 2
Main idea: Fewer vehicles
Starter: If even a small … ·
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Link
Main idea: Shorter, less stressful journeys
Starter: Consequently, journeys would become … ·
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Body Paragraph 2 — Round-the-clock service and traffic flow(90–110 words)
0 words
Goal: Reason 2: explain it and give an example.
Topic sentence
Main idea: 24-hour → traffic spread
Starter: In addition, a 24-hour … ·
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Explanation 1
Main idea: Shift workers must drive now
Starter: At present, many shift … ·
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Example
Main idea: Hospital, factory staff
Starter: For instance, hospital staff … ·
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Explanation 2
Main idea: Travel outside rush hour
Starter: Moreover, some people might … ·
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Link
Main idea: Less peak pressure
Starter: As a result, the … ·
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Conclusion(35–50 words)
0 words
Goal: Repeat your opinion, sum up both reasons, final thought. No new ideas!
Restated thesis
Main idea: Mostly agree
Starter: In conclusion, I mostly … ·
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Summary
Main idea: Attract drivers + ease peaks
Starter: Removing fares would attract … ·
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Final thought
Main idea: Must be frequent, reliable
Starter: However, the system must … ·
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5Language bank (Band 5.5-6.5)
Mỗi đoạn có bảng collocation riêng. ✓ = có trong bài mẫu · + = cụm mở rộng để học viên tự dùng. 5.5 = nền tảng · 6.5 = nâng band.
Introduction
Collocation
Form
Vietnamese
Band
Bài mẫu
traffic congestion
noun + noun
ùn tắc giao thông
5.5
✓
a daily frustration
adj + noun
nỗi bực bội hằng ngày
6.5
✓
fast-growing cities
adj + noun
các thành phố phát triển nhanh
5.5
✓
fare-free buses
adj + noun
xe buýt miễn phí
6.5
✓
around the clock
fixed phrase
suốt ngày đêm
6.5
✓
tackle this issue
verb + noun
giải quyết vấn đề này
5.5
✓
Body Paragraph 1 — Shifting drivers onto public transport
Collocation
Form
Vietnamese
Band
Bài mẫu
removing fares
verb + noun
bỏ thu tiền vé
6.5
✓
switch to public transport
verb phrase
chuyển sang giao thông công cộng
5.5
✓
the cost of tickets
noun phrase
giá vé
5.5
✓
a family of four
noun phrase
gia đình bốn người
5.5
✓
change this decision
verb + noun
thay đổi quyết định này
5.5
✓
a small proportion of
noun phrase
một tỉ lệ nhỏ
6.5
✓
fall significantly
verb + adv
giảm đáng kể
6.5
✓
less stressful
adv + adj
ít căng thẳng hơn
5.5
✓
the number of vehicles
noun phrase
số lượng phương tiện
5.5
✓
Body Paragraph 2 — Round-the-clock service and traffic flow
Collocation
Form
Vietnamese
Band
Bài mẫu
a 24-hour service
noun phrase
dịch vụ 24 giờ
5.5
✓
throughout the day
prep phrase
suốt cả ngày
5.5
✓
shift workers
noun + noun
người làm theo ca
6.5
✓
adds to traffic
verb phrase
làm tăng lưu lượng giao thông
6.5
✓
hospital staff
noun + noun
nhân viên bệnh viện
5.5
✓
rely on public transport
verb phrase
dựa vào giao thông công cộng
6.5
✓
outside rush hour
prep phrase
ngoài giờ cao điểm
6.5
✓
a reliable service
adj + noun
dịch vụ đáng tin cậy
5.5
✓
considerably reduced
passive phrase
giảm đáng kể
6.5
✓
Conclusion
Collocation
Form
Vietnamese
Band
Bài mẫu
In conclusion
linker
tóm lại
5.5
✓
24 hours a day
fixed phrase
24 giờ mỗi ngày
5.5
✓
round-the-clock services
adj + noun
dịch vụ suốt ngày đêm
6.5
✓
ease pressure
verb + noun
giảm áp lực
6.5
✓
frequent and reliable
adv + adj
thường xuyên và đáng tin cậy
5.5
✓
Useful structures
Although + clause, + main clause (concession)
Noun, which + verb …, + main verb (non-defining relative clause)
If + present, + will / can + verb (conditional for results)
This means that + clause (explaining a consequence)
… be + past participle (passive voice for processes and policies)
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