Can Individuals Help the Environment? — 03.02.2026
Essay type: Opinion (agree / disagree — to what extent)Band 5.5-6.5Stance: DisagreeTarget ≈ 280 wordsModel essay: Band 6.5
Student's Edition
Ngô Đức Thảo
MTESOL · Academic Director
Task 2 Topic
Some people believe that individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a real difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
1Task analysis
Item
Detail
Essay type
Opinion (agree / disagree — to what extent)
Main topic
Whether ordinary people can improve the environment or only governments and big companies can
Keywords
individuals · do nothing · improve the environment · governments and large companies · a real difference
Task focus
Decide whether individuals have any power to improve the environment compared with governments and large companies
Required position
Say clearly how far you agree or disagree and keep the same position in every paragraph
Plain-English meaning
Some say ordinary people cannot help nature at all; only governments and big businesses can. Do you agree?
Hidden trap
The statement is extreme (can do nothing, only). You can disagree with it while accepting that governments and companies have the greatest power
Chosen stance
Disagree. Governments and companies have the greatest power, but individual choices add up and citizens are the force that pushes those institutions to act
Main-idea plan
BP1 → collective lifestyle choices significantly reduce waste and emissions · BP2 → consumers and voters push companies and governments to change
2Idea generation
Body 1 — The combined power of individual choices
Collective lifestyle choices reduce waste and emissions ✓ strongest
Diet and transport choices matter
Habits spread to family and friends dự phòng
Body 2 — Citizens drive corporate and political change
Consumer demand forces companies to change ✓ strongest
Voters and campaigns shape environmental laws
Volunteers restore local areas dự phòng
✓ strongest = ý dùng trong bài mẫu · dự phòng = ý thay thế, không có trong bài mẫu.
3Skeleton
Introduction
General statement: Environmental decline = serious challenge
Paraphrased task: Rewrite: citizens powerless, only governments, corporations
Thesis: Disagree, but institutions matter most
Body 1: Lifestyle choices of millions → less waste, lower emissions
Body 2: Consumer demand + votes → companies, governments act
Conclusion: Restate the opinion → summarise both reasons → final thought
4Plan & write your paragraphs
How to use: Read the main idea, tap the cue words to add them to the box, then write
your own sentence. Your essay is built automatically at the bottom and saved in this browser.
Introduction(45–60 words)
0 words
Goal: Topic → rewrite the statement → give your opinion.
General statement
Main idea: Environmental decline = serious challenge
Starter: The deterioration of the … ·
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Paraphrased task
Main idea: Rewrite: citizens powerless, only governments, corporations
Starter: Some claim that ordinary … ·
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Thesis
Main idea: Disagree, but institutions matter most
Starter: I disagree with this … ·
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Body Paragraph 1 — The combined power of individual choices(90–110 words)
0 words
Goal: Reason 1: explain it and give an example.
Topic sentence
Main idea: Combined effect is huge
Starter: The main reason I … ·
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Explanation 1
Main idea: Millions of small decisions
Starter: Everyday decisions about transport … ·
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Example
Main idea: Cycling, buses improve air
Starter: For example, if commuters … ·
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Explanation 2
Main idea: Less food waste
Starter: Similarly, reducing food waste … ·
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Link
Main idea: Behaviour matters
Starter: Therefore, individual behaviour plays … ·
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Body Paragraph 2 — Citizens drive corporate and political change(90–110 words)
0 words
Goal: Reason 2: explain it and give an example.
Topic sentence
Main idea: Individuals drive institutional change
Starter: In addition, individuals are … ·
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Explanation 1
Main idea: Consumer demand → companies adapt
Starter: Businesses depend on their … ·
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Example
Main idea: Supermarkets cut packaging
Starter: For instance, many supermarkets … ·
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Explanation 2
Main idea: Voters → laws
Starter: Likewise, governments are more … ·
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Link
Main idea: Change starts with people
Starter: As a result, the … ·
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Conclusion(35–50 words)
0 words
Goal: Repeat your opinion, sum up both reasons, final thought. No new ideas!
Restated thesis
Main idea: Disagree
Starter: In conclusion, I disagree … ·
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Summary
Main idea: Choices matter + push institutions
Starter: Although governments and large … ·
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Final thought
Main idea: Everyone must act
Starter: Everyone therefore has a … ·
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5Language bank (Band 5.5-6.5)
Mỗi đoạn có bảng collocation riêng. ✓ = có trong bài mẫu · + = cụm mở rộng để học viên tự dùng. 5.5 = nền tảng · 6.5 = nâng band.
Introduction
Collocation
Form
Vietnamese
Band
Bài mẫu
the natural environment
adj + noun
môi trường tự nhiên
5.5
✓
the most serious challenges
noun phrase
những thách thức nghiêm trọng nhất
6.5
✓
ordinary citizens
adj + noun
người dân bình thường
5.5
✓
real change
adj + noun
thay đổi thực sự
5.5
✓
major corporations
adj + noun
các tập đoàn lớn
6.5
✓
the greatest influence
noun phrase
ảnh hưởng lớn nhất
6.5
✓
Body Paragraph 1 — The combined power of individual choices
Collocation
Form
Vietnamese
Band
Bài mẫu
the combined effect
adj + noun
tác động tổng hợp
6.5
✓
individual choices
adj + noun
lựa chọn cá nhân
5.5
✓
energy use
noun + noun
việc sử dụng năng lượng
5.5
✓
seem insignificant
verb phrase
có vẻ không đáng kể
6.5
✓
a major impact
adj + noun
tác động lớn
5.5
✓
air quality
noun + noun
chất lượng không khí
5.5
✓
improve noticeably
verb + adv
cải thiện rõ rệt
6.5
✓
reducing food waste
verb + noun
giảm lãng phí thực phẩm
5.5
✓
sent to landfill
passive phrase
được đưa ra bãi chôn lấp
6.5
✓
plays a significant role
verb + noun
đóng vai trò quan trọng
6.5
✓
Body Paragraph 2 — Citizens drive corporate and political change
Collocation
Form
Vietnamese
Band
Bài mẫu
the driving force
adj + noun
động lực chính
6.5
✓
eco-friendly products
adj + noun
sản phẩm thân thiện với môi trường
5.5
✓
remain competitive
verb phrase
duy trì sức cạnh tranh
6.5
✓
plastic packaging
adj + noun
bao bì nhựa
5.5
✓
introduce environmental laws
verb + noun
ban hành luật môi trường
6.5
✓
care about the issue
verb phrase
quan tâm đến vấn đề
5.5
✓
large institutions
adj + noun
các tổ chức lớn
5.5
✓
pressure from ordinary people
noun phrase
áp lực từ người dân
6.5
✓
Conclusion
Collocation
Form
Vietnamese
Band
Bài mẫu
In conclusion
linker
tóm lại
5.5
✓
improve the environment
verb + noun
cải thiện môi trường
5.5
✓
greater power
adj + noun
quyền lực lớn hơn
5.5
✓
make a real difference
verb phrase
tạo ra khác biệt thực sự
6.5
✓
a responsibility to act
noun phrase
trách nhiệm hành động
6.5
✓
Useful structures
Although + clause, + main clause (concession)
Noun, which + verb …, + main verb (non-defining relative clause)
If + present, + will / can + verb (conditional for results)
This means that + clause (explaining a consequence)
… be + past participle (passive voice for processes and policies)
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